you didnt write which track so im assuming its 'cash trance'

that bassline sounds a little low on volume

and the supersaw should probably be filtered or faded in gradually it comes in to abruptly.

and after the lead cuts out and the pad comes in its such a quick change with no flow

it sounds like another song has started

but the pads and synth goes together well

and maybe add some percs the beat sounds a bit plain

and you need a bit of variation rather than just changing from one melody to the next back to the other

maybe some breaks or something different

not sure it sorta gets a bit repititive

but good effort, just needs more work

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yes i did and didnt write cash trance the melody was a free loop and was my first one i made as it came with a pack i got , i kept that one simple no volume in out anything jus used vangaurd and played with that , my second return of the d i get more used to it and play with the tools more
ravin ravin i was completly on my own and decided to go a little funky
its a learning curve , but thats what its all about

seriously considering vocals but i want my own not and i have no clue of how to do it yet

Last edited by adi_hanson on Jan-17-2008 at 12:02

i like the melodie, i think you need some reverb on your revers crash though, the idea of the song is very good, but it laks flow, if you worked on the little details this could be a very cood tune. ps try a loop to fill it to. see what i finnished this morning.
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yeah thanks djstardust i just listened and its sounds cool a reverbed crash , so im going to listen to evrybodys feedback and im gonna go back over them

your tune sounds just like the good old days


cash trance now changed and updated

Last edited by adi_hanson on Jan-17-2008 at 16:42

ive listen to the above comments and redone 2 of my tunes
link here

as usual please comment

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