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well done.
Some parts are kind of boring, but the breakbeat part is well done! Like when i heard it I wanted to get down and funky.
In fact, you should have more breaks in the song, and maybe include the famous vox we all know and love. (although the keppin it slip is tite.)
the annoying synth that comes in at 2:05 needs to be changed, it sounds like crap.
i like the effects you did on the melody, top rate.
all in all, keep workin on it, its cool.
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The father made fetuses with flesh licking ladies / While you and your mother were asleep in the trailer park / Thunderous sparks from the dark of the stadiums / The music and medicine you needed for comforting / So make all your fat, fleshy fingers fingers to moving / And pluck all your silly strings and / Bend all your notes for me and / Soft silly music is meaningful, magical / The movements were beautiful / All in your ovaries / All of them milking with green fleshy flowers / While powerful pistons were sugary sweet machines, / Smelling of semen all under the garden / Was all you were needing when you still believed in me.
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