Its been awhile since I posted original meterial of mine so here I am with a new, banging track!

check it out and please tell me what u think


Gil Shwartz - Remembered (Original Mix)

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downloadin as we speak

hehe so you're on fire too Gil?

dl'ing it now mate, i'll be back later
LW

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not exactly, i've been working on that track for long time and i worked on other projects in the backround so now its finished

awaiting comments

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Originally posted by Gil Shwarts not exactly, i've been working on that track for long time and i worked on other projects in the backround so now its finished

yeah that's what i have to do as well sometimes but most people don't know that i think... and then they keep telling me 'yet another one' if they don't know the whole story hehe but then again... i forgive them

listened to the track, it's sounding good! but there's one big disharmony in the bass during the play of the phasing main lead! that's the only thing that bothered me in this track... it's near the end of the main lead loop.

Maybe turn down the rather loud synth that kicks in every now and then, it takes alot away from the other synths. The buildup is rather long, but i like it, kind of creepy atmosphere that is broken through by the piano )

I hope this helped, and that i didn't offend you I'd rate it 7/10 (minus the disharmony that should be easily taken care of).

take care!
LW

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Yeah I had a huge problem with the bassline there, tried to do some stuff with it but that's the closest i got to a perfect match


thanks for the comment!

Sorry m8, either it's not my style of trance, or its just not pumping enough for me.

The samples all sound to 'Fruity' for me (I hate Fruity Loops samples), and I'm not even sure if you used fruity.

The main riff has potential, but it just doesnt get me in any way.

Sorry, but thats how I feel

kr00t0n

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well after listening to your track i thought, it would do with some good editing.. some of the samples are too hard (uuh the sample that you use from the beginning till the end.. tune it down a little) if you ask me..
and a thought of mine maybe you should let the piano sample play a solo or somehthing and then hitting the middle (the main melody if ya know what i mean)..
and uuh.. imo you should try to well, try to put more accent on the type of music you're trying to make.. it's no somewhere between uplifiting and hardtrance (mainly bcause of some of your samples and the build-up you used)
hope to have helped you, it's just my opinion and i still kinda liked the tune..

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(Club Mix)
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Originally posted by Gil Shwarts Thanks bro (Club Mix) coming pretty soon

i'm looking forward to it..

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Listening now....I think the lead in the intro is too loud, it takes all the attention. Also the intro is too long for me...

The lead cuts annoyingly thru your mix....haven't heard your club mix yet....but that really spoiled the, otherwise cool, song for me

the sound that comes in at 5:30 is wikkid

But listen to the bassline at exactly 5:40....it is one tone too high for my gut

It's got the right melodys, the right instruments, the right structure (tho arguably the break at 5:something could have come sooner) but the mix is definately lacking....(relative volumes of the channels)
Just my honest 2 cents, will listen to the club mix too some time

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