Just wanted to get some thoughts on a track pending release :

http://www.amonvision.com/Alan-M_-_...-M_Re-Work).mp3

Thanks!

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great track, alan!

nothing more to say, mate!

keep at it!!!

but wouldnt "snow" be a better title?

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Originally posted by Klangzentrum great track, alan! nothing more to say, mate! keep at it!!! but wouldnt "snow" be a better title?

Glad you like it

Winter Rain sounds a lot more dramatic... but I coulda called it "Charley Buys Pens Downtown" and it would have made just as much sense.

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Nice track. Great bassline, although it sounds a little muffled. It could use some more mid frequencies.
The 16th note hihat sounds bad, sort of like a machine gun. Maybe some shuffle and stereo delay would help make it more organic?
The off beat hihat seems buried in the mix making the track lose some of it's groove.
Other than that it's a superb track.

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Originally posted by Eldritch Nice track. Great bassline, although it sounds a little muffled. It could use some more mid frequencies. The 16th note hihat sounds bad, sort of like a machine gun. Maybe some shuffle and stereo delay would help make it more organic? The off beat hihat seems buried in the mix making the track lose some of it's groove. Other than that it's a superb track.

Yeah, I definitely lack when it comes to percussion... I'm doing my best to work on that.

Glad you, for the most part, liked it, Eldritch!

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Dude!

I love this track!

I don't have anything else to say!

I love everything about it!

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Originally posted by xxonemanriotxx Dude! I love this track! I don't have anything else to say! I love everything about it!

Some constructive criticism would have been nice, but I'm glad you like it.

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Hey, like the synth at the start and the acid line to. Nice bass and piano.

Love the glitch fx before the break ends. Good track mate.

really like the melodies to this track alanzo, id love to hear a 320k version id buy it if i heard it on beatport!!

maybe some cool sweeps and fx in the break would add kinda goes a bit to quiet, 8\10

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Originally posted by chrisspob maybe some cool sweeps and fx in the break would add kinda goes a bit to quiet, 8\10

I was trying to go for a good deal of tension in the break.. hense why it's just the piano and no bass for 16 bars.

Glad everyone is liking it, though.

It'll be released along with the Original Mix and a Remix from Stan Void.

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I'll be lazy and quote this guy:

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Originally posted by chrisspob really like the melodies to this track alanzo, id love to hear a 320k version id buy it if i heard it on beatport!! maybe some cool sweeps and fx in the break would add kinda goes a bit to quiet, 8\10

Good work on the melodies indeed.

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Good tune mate. Sounds like something Airbase would produce.

Breakdown is a little long for my taste but thats purely a personal preference. Melody is good. Overall the track is a bit too trancey for me but obviously again, thats just me.

Well done on the release!

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