Originally posted by El~ZaPo
I could have voted for myself, but I think Cyclopter deserves the vote more.
why thank you, that was lovely
May-15-2002 21:13
davinox
diving deep into sound
Registered: Dec 2001
Location: you could say i'm from dallas
i voted for BSE....his weed one cracked me up.
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The father made fetuses with flesh licking ladies / While you and your mother were asleep in the trailer park / Thunderous sparks from the dark of the stadiums / The music and medicine you needed for comforting / So make all your fat, fleshy fingers fingers to moving / And pluck all your silly strings and / Bend all your notes for me and / Soft silly music is meaningful, magical / The movements were beautiful / All in your ovaries / All of them milking with green fleshy flowers / While powerful pistons were sugary sweet machines, / Smelling of semen all under the garden / Was all you were needing when you still believed in me.
May-16-2002 03:20
Lovely
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Seattle WA
I voted for Orbax! He is the Haiku master! - Lovely
May-17-2002 05:16
Orbax
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2002
Location:
why thank you lovely
your kind words give me great hope
hopefully ill win
~~~Xxx{{{TrancEaddicT Haiku Alliance}}}xxX~~~
May-17-2002 20:35
IronDragon
Ya'll be some busters
Registered: Jan 2002
Location: So sleepy
Anyone but me. I write the worst haikus when I'm stressed.
May-17-2002 20:46
cycloptor
BANANA!!
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: the hammer
this is too funny... i cant believe im actually checking the score
orbax, my man... youve got some really cool ones. me likey vely much.
thanks though.. im gonna go re-read the poems.. and we should do tanka as well.. i think theyre 7-9-7... i think.
