I like it has a kinda old sound(i think that is what you were going for?). I think the kick needs to be changed, and when the lead was panned right and left it kinda hurt my ears but i think that is my crappy headphones fault.

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Originally posted by pwnage1 I like it has a kinda old sound(i think that is what you were going for?). I think the kick needs to be changed, and when the lead was panned right and left it kinda hurt my ears but i think that is my crappy headphones fault.

Hah yeah the old sound was intentional, and I'd been working on shitty speakers that were literally side by side so i never noticed the panning, thats been changed, might update the OP yet tonight with a new version. Cheers

word, op updated

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Last edited by mezzir on Feb-11-2008 at 06:55

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I like this. Has kind of an "old school" sound like the guy said above. That's a good thing, since I love older trance.

Critique: It seems like the frequency spectrum is kind of unbalanced; maybe you're a little light on the bass and kick?

I just had to say one more thing. The song has a perfect amount of repetitiveness it keeps adding things and subtracting elements at the perfect times. That is something i am yet to master. it seems i always end up adding things to fast. and then when i add them slower it is to slow.

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Originally posted by pwnage1 I just had to say one more thing. The song has a perfect amount of repetitiveness it keeps adding things and subtracting elements at the perfect times. That is something i am yet to master. it seems i always end up adding things to fast. and then when i add them slower it is to slow.

hah thanks man, its all just practice. i've been writing for years and its just finally coming together. seriously, just put the time in. for the last two weeks i've been writing probably 4 hours a day at least

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