Registered: Apr 2002
Location: lost and wandering looking for directions.
liked:
- nice acid lead! bit repetitive but good enough to make a track
- the pads/strings/fx/whatever in the background are cool too, gives a well structured feel to the track
- the track overall has a very very clear sound, well done in cleaning those frequencies
didn't like:
- the percussion works, but is a bit too standard, maybe you went that way to make the acid-ness stand out? this "problem" is mostly highlighted during the intro, which sounds a bit lame.
- there's some loop that comes up only 2 or 3 times during the entire track that sounds bad, like there's an overload of reverb and clashing percs. It can be heard on the buildup at around 03:50-04:05 - honestly i think there's something seriously wrong with that buildup.
A little bit of work here and there and you have something good enough for a release. I'm gonna throw out a number to rate this: 7/10
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Feb-28-2008 20:39
evo8
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Registered: Aug 2004
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hey thanks for listening, appreciate ur feedback!
the "loop" is just some delay on the snare in certain places, dont think it sounds that bad personally!
Originally posted by evo8
hey thanks for listening, appreciate ur feedback!
the "loop" is just some delay on the snare in certain places, dont think it sounds that bad personally!
Possibly the best part of the track.
You add reverb to your kick at one point while it's running on 4's. I would bounce a singly verb'ed kick or use a sample as this doesn't work as well as you intended.
I agree with noikeee about the crystal sound.You can understand it from the intro
As for the delay at snare is not bad at all.
Except from the very good level at clearing frequencies I like also the style of the track. It has this dancey acid vibe that I like to listen to a club.
Originally posted by Mr Kre8
Possibly the best part of the track.
You add reverb to your kick at one point while it's running on 4's. I would bounce a singly verb'ed kick or use a sample as this doesn't work as well as you intended.
Thanks for listening, about the reverbed kick, again i personally think its sounds good, it is a different kick sample also
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Originally posted by Sparkunian
Hi evo8
I agree with noikeee about the crystal sound.You can understand it from the intro
As for the delay at snare is not bad at all.
Except from the very good level at clearing frequencies I like also the style of the track. It has this dancey acid vibe that I like to listen to a club.
in the mix "psyunite"
