Not really my style so not sure how much my opinion is worth but your sequenced patterns go on for too long without change. The first drum beat goes for a whole 40 seconds before the next change is introduced and same again and again. Just makes the listener lose interest.

Some elements of the track are good. The clap / snare is way too loud and gets irritating. Some of the changes and melodies are good. Work on the arrangement, introduce things quicker and turn down that bloody clap!!

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