Heey mates !

here it is: long awaited track, Conclusive...
But still in demo- so that you could say how do you feel about the production. I put it in 320 kbp/s quality. Enjoy and... FEEDBACK NEEDED !!!! Please

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Greetings,
Lunar Eclipse.

wow, seems to be pro.
this track is very trance and energy, I can hear a lot of work done here.


how about sending me some midi files ? I wanna listen to the lead on my fl studio :>


good work....!!!

Hi fenix. Thanks for your reply. Lets stay in touch on PM's.

Any more opinions :> ?

This sounds awesome, fantastic track...

However, after the break, the track seems to loose its momentum? It has a good rythm and beat before the break, but there seems to be something that's not quite so flowing after the break. Anyway, it has a brilliant atmosphere, and those pads and synths are brilliant.

Keep it up,

Decane.

Awesome. I wouldn't change a thing. Balance between pads, drums, bass etc. is excellent.

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Well thanks a lot ! I ve alreade lowered a few mid freq., so that there is less white noise. But the link is still old :> ANY one else ?

Well let's see here... I hear a few glitches in the sound. What's that all about?

You have a very Ron Van Den Beuken* feeling going on here at the beginning... This continues throughout the track. The bass has almost "too much" body I would say. It overwhelms the midrange of the track. That could just be me personally, too. Other than that you have achieved great success with a trance anthem here. It is only a little bit generic. Overall I would say, perhaps mix it down or EQ it in such a way that Ron Van Den Beuken* would be very proud, because this is exactly the style you have achieved. Good work, and great analogue sound.

Corrected the artist I mentioned **

Last edited by Evolve140 on Mar-04-2008 at 08:21

Try putting some variation in that plucked bassline that is easily heard in the intro. It sounds like a "machine gun".

You need a lot more sub-bass in your kick.

The square that comes in with the pad has some bad notes.. try reworking it. Try making the square a bit brighter, too.

The track really feels rushed. The break comes in, you have your kinda lame melody, and then BAM.. you think you can just fuck with the energy of the crowd before they even have a chance to enjoy the track.

You have a bit of distortion in the track when the bass/kick/melody all come in.

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Hey.
If you listen to some "powered" trance you notice, that there is no complicated melody.

Also plucked sounds are going to make a realisitic sensation of rush- so it does not need to be so "difficult".
Maybe you could listen to some other rush tracks, like
Mike Wind- Oxygen Essential(asot mix), Dmitri Federov - Falling of Stars (Paul Miller Remix), Entrance 2008 anthem etc. It sounds quite similar.

Ye disortions...I can agree with the glitches. I changed some freq to avoid any disortions. I will send the newest sample soon.

For Alanzo: I dont care about your "fucking" and "machine guns". I try doing my best, so dont say I do a "fuck" for crowds. Anyway, people like the song. Thats enough for me.

Maybe I am wrong but I suppose alanzo to be a little bit jealous or something. Am I right :> ?

Regards,

its good overall, strong intro with the bass, drums and stuttered rhythem but perhaps a bigger hook in the lead part might make it less generic sounding. im also hearing a little too much bass through headphones after someone else mentioned it.
im still learning myself so would also be interested in looking at the midi files and details of what synths you used to make it, thanks.

Last edited by 00264167 on Mar-04-2008 at 23:27

Hehe.. no, I'm not jealous.

I didn't mean fuck in a derogatory way. You can replace it with "mess" or "screw" etc...

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As I read your comments- I realise my faults. It is really hard to find some of them. (but another part of them is "visible for me" so they have already been changed). The best thing is getting feedback from "3rd person" people.
Nevertheless I ve already made some corrections. Furthermore, I will focus today on some particular mastering.
So the newest sample will probably be posted in a few hours.


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