Hi guys,

Your feedback on this would be appreciated. It hasnt turned out how I 1st imagined. Changed direction a few times, and kept parts as I thought may as well experiment. Vocal wasnt intended either but thought I'd give a go. Does it fit?

Sample length: 4:25
Link: www.Djjustinallen.com/Rising.mp3

Thanks

ok here we go...

bassline sounds great on the kick

don't like the hard panning to the right, i understand the ride & wood block are on the left but the whitenoise ride or whatever it is on the right is too powerful. bring each a lil more center

piano! -- hi from 1997

vocal totally fits on the piano -- i'd like to hear a few bars of it dry

not sure how i feel about the bass/low tom hit at 2:45.

i think either the lead (sound design wise) needs to be more interesting and needs more movement OR musically it needs more.

4:15, would of expected more of this sound when it broke out -- very mark knight and with a few minimal tech sounds on top you would have nailed it.

cool ideas justin, might be the start of the new toolroom knights compilation

Thanks for the feedback mate. Ill prob go back and have a work around with the lead and percs. vocal was dry at one point but I changed it may put it back dry with the piano, then after the break fit in the tech sounds a bit.

hey, realy like that kick, goes well with the rest of the percussion
you have a nice sorta squarish bass, then u have another subbass which i dont really like, also the new sound that comes in at 34 secs doesnt really fit imo

id keep the squarish sound, it adds a really nice feel to the track i think!

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