I am making this track but I need opinion to know should I continue )
here is link
http://www.sendspace.com/file/7p90gs
any comment is welcome...

I like it, although I'm not sure whether you want to do trance or ambient here.

If you want to make it a dance track, I think you should make the beat go on for longer and make the breakdown shorter and more lively. On the other hand, I think some of the sounds could work nicely in an ambient track.

Thanks for answer )
yea, i know it need a lot of to do... one more man told me about breakdown also to be shorter...
ill try to improve it )
ty again )