only thing is that the sound sometimes sounds a bit muffled... maybe the main lead is a bit too strong at points? i had my volume very low, and it came through quite loudly.
piano's are great, they're very dreamy and fit the track nicely. the vocals are ok, but it's almost impossible to hear what he is saying it's nice for the atmosphere though, although it can't be understood.
good job, this is a nice melodic tune
greetz,
LW
___________________
Icone / Van Gelder / Blue Manta / The Elemental
Registered: Nov 2001
Location: mississauga, ontario
again, great track, =P
that vocal sample is SOOO cool... but a little overpowering at 3:38.... but it fits in really well at around the 6:20 mark...
hehe... i think you should rename it.... uplifting retouch? make a really cool name ________ mix.... i dunno.... something to do with explorers.... =P
nice work...
___________________
May-14-2002 01:17
Haak
analog evading shark
Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Oslo, Norway
Awesome track! Love the melody!
Very well produced, the main synth sounds great although it's a bit loud as said above.
Only thing I find a little weird is that the clap is on the 1st and 3rd beat as opposed to the 2nd and 4th.
Thanks for listening to my tune guys.. it's really awsome to have some feedback from real trance lovers
I'm fixing some of the stuff you guys pointed out right now.. the over pumping vocal .. the loudness of the melody..
it's weird sometimes.. you don't hear what's wrong until someone points it out..
Maybe I'll try to figure out a new name too.. I was kinda like the name Explorers.. and it is an uplifting retouch.. because the original Explorers song I made was more chill
well.. its not a bad thing .. its just that the 'clap' sound which can also be a snare in many other genres of music is pretty much a standard thing.. to hear it being used in a different timing can really throw you off the beat, its like trying to drive a car with the steering reversed!
I made an improved version of my song.. I lowered the main melody a good deal and the result was much better. you guys were right.. so right.... I also removed the vocal at the spot which mr. poopyhead suggested and I think it was an improvement
I owe you guys a great deal!
If you're interested you can listen to the result here.. the file is 7 megabytes
[EDIT] your clap is still on 1 and 3 !, its really throwing me off lol , it sounds like there is something wrong with the tune.. i think u should fix it [/EDIT]
