dl'ing now mate, hope the bassline fits better in this one?

cheers!
LW

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hehe
yeah

(i hope)

ROFL!

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Originally posted by Gil Shwarts hehe yeah (i hope) ROFL!

yep the bassline is better indeed! and the synth you used across the track is well edited, so that it doesn't overpower the other synths.

good job!
LW

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also, i took out the whole intro


thanks for the comment.

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Dear Gil Shwartz !

Please produce again a track like euphoric paradise. It is full of energize, sounds are clear and phat. I don't like the new one very much...sorry. But Euphoric Paradise is my personal favourite.

Trancevision

It's a nice track, but I still think the bassline sounds abit weird in the main part. And I think you should try out some different basslines sometimes, it seems that you're always using that standard 1/8 bassline (correct me if I'm wrong). Another thing I don't like is the loud synth that first comes in at 12 seconds, I just don't like the sound and it's a bit loud. But you definately have some good elements in the track

This is not your best work, but keep it up!

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dl-ed it, too.
Nice long intro (in the 11.5 MB version), and I liked most ideas until the bassline set in and at 5:40 it sounds disharmonic to me...
Also, I'm still missing some kick and power in the bassdrum. Don't misunderstand me, I know this isn't hardtrance, but the "little" bassdrum makes it sound so homemade while the rest sounds more pro.
keep working, Gil!

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listening to this mix too now....

still think that lead sound is a bit harsh (especially when you open up the release)

nice fluffy bass (reso!)....tho not too creative with the sequencing (umpaa umpaa)...ok for hard trance, for this something more complicated would be nicer

ah the nice sound comes in sooner in this mix! neat (about 1:40)

maybe in the break at 2:something it would be nice to get some warm pads or a "wind" sound in the background, otherwise it sounds so naked.

It's a good track, but I too have heard better from you.

Keep it up

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Originally posted by Trancevision Dear Gil Shwartz ! Please produce again a track like euphoric paradise. It is full of energize, sounds are clear and phat. I don't like the new one very much...sorry. But Euphoric Paradise is my personal favourite. Trancevision

word

definately better than the original, i think all the possible improvements av already been sed

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