22 views, no feedback? come on guys does it really suck that bad?

listening... i dont like the synthy sound running from the start.. bass can be improved imo, your synth line doesnt sound "real", it has that yamaha children keyboard feel...


i changed my mind, heres my 50 cent, i would take what youve done so far and make it intentionally retro sounding like an atari or something... like ferrys late style, stuff like that...

but if u wanna go the trancey way, you have some more road ahead, not a really long road actually, just perfecting your synth skills and mixing and mastering skills, i can hear u have ideas but dont implement them that well... anyway i would have given more thought bout the main melody and additional rhythm synths of some sort...

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It's sounds okay but has no presence. Where's the percussion and energy?

your saying some more advanced percs might help it out?