I've been making music for about 5 month now.. so I'm still in a learning process at the moment..

The first half still needs alot of work.. Song sounds empty for now..
I added a bit of melody in the middle tho..

It's far from finished.. but just wanted some tips and criticism to see if I'm on the right track. thx~

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Last edited by aLviNx80 on May-20-2008 at 22:05

14 Mb's O_o Oh, man... I hope it's good ))))

So... Listenin... I like it. 'A'. I believe you'll make it 'A+' )))

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You're definately on the right track. Work on the percussion. And bring out the bass some more. Love the lead synth.

nice mix

Thx for taking the time to check it out guys.

appreciate the kind words~

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