downing as i type

ok a few things:

- sometimes it is so loud that it makes some krrr sounds but that might be just the mp3 converting so dont mind that.
- lovely synths you have there .. the stereo thingy realy works out and sounds are clean warm and loud.
- molody. it is a bit short i think you could have made it something longer (but that's just my opinion)
-break: nice change into the break .. but at the climax i would have expceted it build up to song bigger(longer) melody (but again this is just my own opionion)

- overal it sounds realy good. but it misses something not sure what.

keep em comming..

Last edited by bjornc on Jun-14-2008 at 20:17

thanks for the info bud , it does need a bit extra doing to make it not miss anything but ill get there ,

32 VIEWS BUT ONLY 7 ACTUAL DOWNLOADS , as i said please download and do what you want until its finished then listen please

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lol i heard this melody somewhere.........


your bass sounds too much like a synth or an arp imo
compress+eq it I say

slight clipping at like 1m40-1m50 and afterwards

cool filter work at 2m30+

The synths are nice but the breakdown at like 3m40 doesnt really give the impression of a breakdown because of the filtering...like youre holding back the synths

Pretty good work on the percussions and synths individually but overall track lacks punch i think