please give it a listen its one of my better ones

Don't worry, no reply don't necessarily mean that no one listened to it.

Anyways, here's my thoughts about your song.

For a song like this, I think your kick should be much~ more powerful. Also, I can't seem to hear a proper bassline. Either I'm just not hearing it, because I'm at work using a cheap headphone, or it's working as a part of the lead synth instead (if the sound I think is your bassline)..
IMO bassline is one of the most important part that gives the drive and charecter in a mix.

Try to gradually build up the sounds instead of introducing them all at once. Also have each elements blend in well, working with each other, so it wouldn't sound like bunch of random sounds thrown in together.

I like the bell sound.. but it's not mixing in very well..
It sounds like two songs are beatmatched, but the mids are conflicting with each other.

Keep up the good work~

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I remixed it and made some chages.... could someone tell me if i have potential or not

Last edited by dJ-matts on Jun-06-2008 at 05:50

hmm no feedback.. plz people i need some feedback so i could try and make it better ....