Love it mate sounds really nice very uplifting indeed maybe if possible i can do a unoffical remix ! in the end very nice track !

This doesn't seem to be produced by an amateur except perhaps that is not loud enough for today's professional standards, but that can be fixed. Really nice sound.

What is your artist name?

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This sounds pretty good indeed.
PDM is right about the levels though, with some proper mixing this could be a good track.
I'm not that fond of supersaw that immediately starts, it takes up to much space in the mix.
Really nice sound that u used in the break, you might wanna adjust those levels though.
You also might wanna beef up that percussions, the snare/clap you used is a bit to loud and cuts through the mix, better lower that volume.

Very nice track! Good job!

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Hi everybody, thank you for the comments.

Godsendxd:
thank you for the good comments, i still need to finish the track yet so i havn't even thought about any remixes.
But i will let you know if i dont get any luck tryin ta sign this.
cheers

Hi PDM

Thank you for the comments, i still dont know that much about mixing yet.
I will try 2 make the mix louder and post an update.
My name is Baz Hughes.
Cheers.

Hi Theran

Thank you for your comments.
Gonna try ta sort out the levels soon, and finish this one.
Your right about the saw type sound havn't even tried 2 eq it yet, maybe it will sound better and use up less headroom when i do.
The snare has been a problem 4 me, cause i dont like it at all.
I'm gonna change it for a better one and try 2 sort out the percussion.
Will post an update when iv'e sorted it.
Your comments were very helpfull mate thank you.

this is a pretty cool tune your pretty talented mate keep it up...

if i can get half that good i be well pleased

I cant get to grips with producing ive had a few weeks here and there and given up. im giving it a last try to get something done....lol

good luck finishing th etune mate.. i like ur style

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Hi ENZ83.

Thanks for the nice comments
And dont give up, i have made some really bad tracks over the years, i'm only just startin ta make tracks that i like.
I know how frustrating it can be, i used to just make loops, then get bored with it and make another loop, and so on..
What i decided 2 do, was make one tune that i was really happy with, and stick with it until it was finished.
Gotta be better than making 10 tunes that are just ok.
keep it up mate.

good work, like the arangement of synths only thing is the first base its just a wee bit to loud. apart from that its good.

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I like it. I would speed it up a little bit.

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Originally posted by dj_alfi change your avatar for fucks sake.

This could be a great track if you could beef it up. Just seems lacking some depth. Good work though.