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That bass sounds a bit boomy on my setup at least. A lot of the other sounds lack a bit of clarity. Others could probably help more as to why. I'm crap at pointing out exactly what needs fixing in other tracks.
It sounds like all the sounds are fighting to be heard above one another and as such I'm struggling to pick out the melodies.
Perc patterns are a bit dull. Arrangement itself drags along.
There is some promise here but I'm afraid you need to do a lot more work at this stage.
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