Sorry m8, sounds like your first try with FL Studio. It's pretty awful.

Everyones first try is crap , mine were awfull (dont even think about that!) But after much money spent on vst's and soon some hardware , head buried in tutorials and arguements with the girlfriend ,ive vastly improved from being a noob 8 months ago , I know its sad but apart from fri and sat nights (social booze time) ive pretty much had my head down studying producing , using tips of this forum and programs that people have recommended and while it will take a while to get that perfect sound .

Keep going and i will tell you that if you carry on and get much better you will think different of your tune

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Oh lol, well thanks for the feedback. Personally I hate usual trance, (Constantly repeating etc) I don´t understand what is so bad about my song.

Please give me some concrete criticism and I´ll know what to change for my next song.

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here we go , fl built in sounds , fl vocals .
Millions have Fl studio , if all use the in-builts the same , sounds the same .
For example if your tune was made using , virus, nexus , vanguard , roland , moog etc it would stand out.
I use Fl but all my sounds are imported from VSTi's , i dont use a single FL sound at all, and especially not the preset vocals.

It will come with time

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alright thanks for the reply.. When you get "Vanguard" the only sound thingy Iïve heard about, what does it do I mean do you get a bunch of samples or some kind of a soundboard? I could look it up but Iïm too lazy and I preferably learn from the pros. :P

Vanguard is pretty old now , but its a program you can get from refx.com and it comes with presets, but you can change and create sounds by turning loads of knobs , change its wave structure and so on.
I use it for filler sounds

the website will enlighten you more

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Okay, I´ll look into it. Thanks for your help man much appreciated!

check out Blue by Rob Papen as well

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okay. :P Well guys be honest, for a first song with those samples wasnt it okay? I mean the melody etc.. :P

structurally it was ok and the only thing that lets you down is the standard sounds that evryone can pickup.Like everyone says , get more samples, sounds , vst's/hardware and practice and you'll return to this and think different.

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