I've been browsing through my library of bits and pieces of musical loops and I dug this one up. You think it's worth saving? I kind of want to finish it, but I guess I'm trying to write something more epic and just plain sweet to listen to.

Download (Right Click and Save Target As)

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Won't download for me, friend.

no work

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Sorry...forgot to make the link public domain. It works now.

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I like it. I think it sounds pretty good but is it me or does something sound off key. I hear a few notes that don't seem like they fit.

It sounds like a good melody but imo the instruments need changing massively. To me good creative idea and flow! I just think it sounds slightly generic. Just my 2 cents though

Take care

There's a lot of nice touches, but overall it's not flowing in a cohesive, satisfying direction. It goes from one chord to the next and shows signs of building and relieving harmonic and melodic tension, but doesn't pull it together in one satisfying overall progression.

Good moments though...you'll find spots for them in future songs no doubt.