her heavenly its the best track you got there
and i really like it! but i think it needs more work on the sound
but thats just something that am pretty sure you will do later
very very progressive track , =)
edit:
my second choice its the grass its not greener
i really DONT like the vocals, but the track its pretty nice for the dance floor , plus! you get a better sound on that one
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Aug-13-2008 16:03
futurefoton929
Junior tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: Champaign, USA
The beginning sounds quite shponglish (her heavenly scent). I really like this part. Some of the things that I don't like is my personal preference so take it w/ a grain of salt.
1) I didn't really like some of the fast kick sequences in the middle. For example, at around 2:00 mark.
2) It seems like the high frequency sounds dominate a tad too much starting 1:45 mark (it might be my headphones). Maybe you should cut down on those components a bit.
3) I think a stutter effect (ala BT) would go ahead pretty well in this song as an small interlude.
Overall, great job.
Aug-14-2008 05:00
Sinnica Hax
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Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Blekinge
Much appreciated, futurefoton929. You are right regarding the fast kick sequense, at least at one part of it, and i'll change it to happen more rarely, frequensies seems fine here though in monitors/headphones.
Regards, Fredrik.
Aug-15-2008 02:24
davemolina
Team Westphal
Registered: May 2005
Location: San Antonio, USA
Good job there!!! I can't really give you technical advice because of my limited knowledge, but I could see it as an "early in the set" kinda track.
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Aug-15-2008 03:05
Sinnica Hax
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Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Blekinge
Dont worry about it Dave, glad to hear you enjoyed it. I am very excited about it and I should be able to wrap it up within the next week. Dont forget that limited knowledge is not an obstacle, you still know what you enjoy and whatnot
Regards, Fredrik.
Aug-15-2008 03:47
pwnage1
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2007
Location: United States
I gave this quite a few listens but never commented. The atmosphere is great it progresses quite nicely. It's really my style this track is just beautiful. And the production quality is great not anything i can think to improve.
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Aug-15-2008 04:12
kitphillips
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Registered: May 2006
Location: Sydney, Australia
I love the nice long intro, and then the melody that comes in. Works well. I'd have to have something slightly better quality to give you production advice, since my computer soundcard is atrocious.
But the overall theme is spot on, good work