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I think you are on the right way but there is a lot more you can do with this track. Overall it sounds kind of dry and lacking real movement. Let me give you some tips:
- Layer some basslines, don't use a simple 1/8 bass, It sound rather dull.
- On the mainlead, you could turn up the release on the envelope to create a longer lead sound, now it stop really abrupt. You can also put some reverb and delay, even a flanger on it, to make it more 'filled out' than it is.
- It also sound like u used a sample from 'prodigy's' slap my bitch up on the percussion (if not, it sounds like it  ), but it has been used almost the entire track. Try to get some variation in the percussion you are using.
- Spice up the overall percussion, maybe use some delay or reverb on it, for instance on the clap.
- on 5.16, you throw a loop in, and the loop is not lowpassed. You suddenly heard the kick get louder. You can set a lowpass filter around the 350Hz, than you get that problem fixed. Or throw it thru a sidechain.
- On the end there is a bass sound, from which I don't really know what it's doing there.
I really like the pad sounds you used and the overall progression is pretty good.
I hope I didn't sound to harsh. I'm just trying to help.
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