Just finished this track that Ive been working on for 3 days now. All i got left to do is some minor tweaks that I need proper monitors to do.

Its a darkish kinda electrotech tune, very Swen Weber inspired..

http://dump.no/files/eb1c2f17897e/D..._FingerBANG.mp3

Feedback is as always apreciated

Enjoy

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wow thanks for all the great feedback

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hmm i really didn´t like the vocals =0/

the track its really well finished but....... didn´t like at all
sorry :$ (just a personal thing)

you really make a good job here, congrats

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So Serene

Hey Alfi, I really liked your track.
I really liked the heavy bass, this track sound like something i'd play in a set.

I have mixed feelings about the vocals, but I'll listen to it a couple of times more.

Keep it up!

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cheers
ive tried removing the vocals, but i couldnt come up with a new element that would work as well with the automation in the buildup..

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Originally posted by dj_alfi cheers ive tried removing the vocals, but i couldnt come up with a new element that would work as well with the automation in the buildup..

Maybe you could try to automate the release on that bass, try to create a sort of 'flight 643' effect.

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mmm , reminds me of scouse house , maybe you wanna put a donk on it

but seriously , very well produced
Sorta the thing that you would hear on a TV program about gang culture.
Very dark,
Not something i would be into ,
but still impressed by your production skills

In all it seems something more aimed at the black youth side of things.

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Thats a really great track mate. Love the bassline in it. I agree with the others that the vocal doesn't go well with the track. Well the rap bit. The "Bang" vox sounds pretty good. What if you tried a really long snare roll for the main break?? Just a suggestion but could give it a kind of Randy katana-In silence or Armani & Ghost airport kind of power to it. Although these tracks are Trance & Techno it could still sound mental with your track the way it builds up and the bass kicks in.

Sounds like something that would get signed to Doorn Records!! Should think about sending it to them.

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Originally posted by SeanCronin Thats a really great track mate. Love the bassline in it. I agree with the others that the vocal doesn't go well with the track. Well the rap bit. The "Bang" vox sounds pretty good. What if you tried a really long snare roll for the main break?? Just a suggestion but could give it a kind of Randy katana-In silence or Armani & Ghost airport kind of power to it. Although these tracks are Trance & Techno it could still sound mental with your track the way it builds up and the bass kicks in.

thanks for the comment

the thing about the vocals is that during the breakdown, there are 7 parameters for the vocals that are automated, and i havent been able to find something to replace it with..

maybe ill have another go with the track when im done working on my ep.

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Haha, this is great.

Suits your "online personality" very well.

I like the vocal, but I think the break goes on way too long.

interesting tune, nice! only thing i think though its lacking is a bit more drive percussion wise, other then that good work! 7/10

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