Hey what do you think of this song, an original composition. I use some really basic software but I think it's a pretty good turnout. Voice any opinion!

It can be found at my website http://www.freewebs.com/solarsound/streaming.htm

I'm referring to the newest, which is on the top. If you feel like listening to the rest you can though

-Solar Sound

nobody?!

Your production sounds very amateur, I'm sorry to say.

The samples are all quite poor, especially the high-pitched sound.

The track flow is horrible, none of the elements work together and there is no coherency between the lot - it sounds like you found as many elements as you could and threw them all together.

However, we all have to start somewhere. I'm sure if you ferret around on the internet for tutorials, you will be able to improve.