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Your production sounds very amateur, I'm sorry to say.
The samples are all quite poor, especially the high-pitched sound.
The track flow is horrible, none of the elements work together and there is no coherency between the lot - it sounds like you found as many elements as you could and threw them all together.
However, we all have to start somewhere. I'm sure if you ferret around on the internet for tutorials, you will be able to improve.
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