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technically speaking:
kick is kinda low there on the mix, snare and other stuff have too much reverb on them IMO...
other then that its decent.
musically speaking:
i felt no "flow" or "drive" or whatever, maybe additional percusive elements will add some spice to it all... same fxs used throughout the track, synths sound really generic, regardless of the old vs. new opinions of mine... after the first break it gets kinda chilly like an ambient track with beats... which i personally don't really like... so IMO you gotta work on your synths, make em more interesting sound wise and your melodies are really simple and have no distinct line beside the chords on which they rely upon... focus more on your ideas and sound design rather then your mixing abilities, its much more important IMO...
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