Now for something complete different:

Click my signature and choose the song called "Technology" on the right.

The song is a quick sketch of the kind of direction i want to take it. Curious for your feedback on the arrangement. instruments, voices and volumes are not finished but do give a sneak peek of the direction i am heading. please note measure 9-16 after the break has one wrong note, but since is far from finished i did not rerender.

Welcome your feedback and if you think it can become something...

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Esoteric sound for the discerning ear

u got to take out that technology vocal, it sounds like the gorilla from the might boosh.

it sounds quite dated (1999ish) esp the vocals which dont fit right, although the ahh bit at the start's ok. i feel theres too much singing starting at 44 seconds and at the end but the instruments and saws between those two times sound good.
personally i think u should ditch all the vocals i think theyre too old sounding and just not professional sounding enough to sit in there ok, although youve done good with the reverb to polish them.

ThnX, that's my feeling as well, the vocals are not "nasty" enough to carry the song. I would decribe it as "Gospel" eurotrance

no exactly the desired effect.... what i will do: I will ditch the male (come one Barbie, let's go party ) and put her in Kontakt3 to see if i can mangle her a bit more, or find a new singer.

The song has been layingin my cupboard for nearly 10 years so yeah it sounds dated

A lot of rework is ahead

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That "technology" sample is really funny.