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Last edited by mfitterer1 on Sep-28-2008 at 21:58

welcome to myspace

for your being your first track, yeah, its pretty good

(my first track sucked like hell)

you got the idea, work more, practice more, enjoy it more =)

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So Serene

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Originally posted by Gabriel Cazali welcome to myspace for your being your first track, yeah, its pretty good (my first track sucked like hell) you got the idea, work more, practice more, enjoy it more =)

Thanks, can you add any thoughts on what you liked and disliked. When I get back in the studio I am going to drop the highs a bit I feel its too bright. And I think the bassline needs some better positioning and maybe a different more tasteful line would be better.

I know it's good for my first track but I am not looking to take solace in that so I really need some opinions from some of you!

Thanks in advance

The intro was boring but 2:20-4:45 was sick! I didnt like the bassline that comes after that. I'd also lower the volume of the crashes

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Originally posted by aleks0 The intro was boring but 2:20-4:45 was sick! I didnt like the bassline that comes after that. I'd also lower the volume of the crashes

Thanks for the input. I didn't think about the intro but when you said that I definitely saw what you meant! Already adjusted the crashes and fx levels, as well as the overall eq of the track. I'll post the second version so you all can compare.

Aleks,

When you are speaking of the bassline that comes after 4:45 are you talking about what is the primary sound in the track immediately after the main lead stops?

Your opinion is much appreciated, will get a new version up tonight

ok ok!

I have not slept in a day and a half and my eyes hurt like hell!

BUT. I made a ton of progress last night and the track has changed a lot. I left the old version up on my myspace as a reference point. The newer one is the one that says v1.2 by it.

Ok so what im looking for with feedback now is more in regard to the coloring of the instruments, opinions on if the snare roll needs to be changed slightly or if it works well, and anything else you would like to share!

The hard work is seeming to pay off with this one!

Look forward to everyones opinions and reactions

-Michael

(Oh and if you're a producer also feel free to send me an add!)

Bump, can anyone help me out here?

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Originally posted by mfitterer1 Bump, can anyone help me out here?

I'll give it a listen tonight and let you know what I think.

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Upcoming releases:
Hernandes ft. Stine Groove - Without You (Kyota remix) (Redux Recordings)
Kyota - Senegal (Flashover Recordings)

New version rendering right now, be up in a few. First time i've been real impressed personally with my work on this track. Lemme know if you like the new version more fellas;-)

How does this new myspace music player work. I have my track uploaded and it shows and everything but I can't figure it out it's not showing up in the actual player? Can anyone figure it out?

i cant get it to play

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Bring on my soundcloud ya!

I know me neither I don't know how to get this damn thing to work. It's uploaded but myspaces new player is OBVIOUSLY too intelligent for me!