not a bad job the only thing i think it needs is the main lead/riff
wasnt big enough i think maybe some more layering in this case as the key part of the tune is the lead/riff

- The percussion sounds a bit dry, you can use reverb, delay or flanger/phaser to spice it up.
- You should lower the volume of the reversed clap (I would even delete it)
- The second synth that enters the break should be a lot more exiting.

While this isn't a bad remix at all, it doesn't really add something new to the original track.

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Originally posted by Theran - The percussion sounds a bit dry, you can use reverb, delay or flanger/phaser to spice it up. - You should lower the volume of the reversed clap (I would even delete it) - The second synth that enters the break should be a lot more exiting. While this isn't a bad remix at all, it doesn't really add something new to the original track.

yes just needs beefing up

I also thought the main lead needed a little work. It seemed a little less vibrant then what I would personally like to see.

the kick sounds to dry like all allready said
but its important to point that out

like that snare :P

and the bassline enters just perfect
overlall
nice track , but it needs more work ...... one advice (it helps for me)

when i make a track, i dont listen to it that much, i try to listen it again in meaby a day or two, why? because that way you can rest your ears
and you will listen it in another way, try it =) that may help
and also put your track in the middle of a playlist , and try to compare volume and quality with another tracks

=) hope that works

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Thank you all for ur comments.They would help me a lot to make the track better and better.

thanks
i really liked it
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