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Most people would go out for a cigarette and chill in your situation but you have created a tune, not that im complaining.
Straight away , i can tell its not your usual clean cut stuff but more set in a field of saw waves!
Some elements in there are good but do sound rough and untamed
Getting the feel that that main hookline might better suit a vocal tune.
overall some bits sound good others a bit rough but its not rubbish , would sound good after you get it to your hardwear/software platform
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