I just think it needs some new and fitting melody, cant explain exactly what feel im after.. But it feels like it just ends and after listening, yep it does deffinately need something more powerful, like i said, a good melody is always nice.. And perhaps the hardest part ;P

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Originally posted by Crillz0r I just think it needs some new and fitting melody, cant explain exactly what feel im after.. But it feels like it just ends and after listening, yep it does deffinately need something more powerful, like i said, a good melody is always nice.. And perhaps the hardest part ;P

Hay Crillz!
First of all thank you for the feedback. =)

Like u said the melody is never an easy part. and as the song goes on u want it to be more and more powerfull. I have been working for a while now on the whole song. My opinion is that the whole song is compressed.... Its like it just started... and then when u want more its starting to fade out. well work work ^^

Take care and ty again for the feedback!
/Jani

well i dont know, am not a big fan of hard trance, but i will try to help you

if you want to improve in melows .. it would be great if you take some piano lessons =), in my case i studied guitar for about 5 years , so thats why i love to put some nice guitars in my tracks :P
(belearic style)

the sound quality its not bad at all! sounds powerfull
but yeah, with some time and dedication you can make better things,
when you are making your track, always ask yourself , is this sounds good, or sounds great? always try go for the great

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