Hi Tim.

Upload ya track Using [[ LINK REMOVED ]]
instead mate, ya might have more luck getting comments.

Good idea, I went ahead and added the link to the first post.

ha speedyshare now were talking .

here goes .

intro ok , hihats panning a little to hard i think

lead at 25 secs and 40 secs sound a little cheesey , need some work on those.
Bassline is good
next lead sound ok but a bit of reverb wouldnt go a miss i think


Not keen on the main melody tune wise

best bit for me is at 3.22

Overall not bad for a learner on free software , but get your paid software , learn it and re do this tune with some good old trancey sounds.

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Poor track, and indeed try to rebuild it with a better software.

The original idea in the track is good.