Hello. This song is rather different. Not necessarily the type of tune I seek to listen to but that is not at all a bad thing .
One major point I would like to make because it became intensely annoying, the synth wood block type sound playing through the left channel needs to be balanced with something on the right channel. The left side of my head felt extremely heavy :P.
As for the vocals, they are interesting. Very dark and startling at first. They could be very defining for this song if seated a little better. I believe the level(s) for the vocal track(s) is just too loud.
Good clarity on elements, although rather random. Very unusual and different. I almost feel as if I'm listening to one of the first songs I wrote and it has been updated with clarity and better instrument choices :P.