Nice ideas, very nice ideas indeed.

I hear that once in a while the kick drum produces distortion, maybe you should look into that, exactly everytime you rest the kick for a moment and put it back again, right there, the first hit of the kickdrum. Maybe the bassline and Kick drum are fighting for space in that instance?

Cheers

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Der Mystik's Music

I'm just starting to learn producing so I can't really comment on the production aspects of this, but as a listener I realllly enjoyed this track. Kept my interest whole way through.

i am also no expert in producing, but i really like your track. the two breaks are great, it is really a good work.

can you tell us what hard/software you used?

two things: at the end just try something with effects, otherwise it becomes a little bit dry. and at 4:30 the bass kick could be a little bit louder (in my ears), but really good productionm, you seem to have talent....

greets