Would go well in the club that's what I'm sure about, only thing, the intro was a bit too long for this kind of song...otherwise, great work

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I like what you have done. but to my ear it sounds like its detuned or off note with the synth. I know you were shooting for a more progressive sound but maybe some melody (i know you want to keep it monotone but...) or a different synth would make it sound tighter imo. Keep at it man the other tracks sound A-1.

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The vocal is too late in timing. IMO needs to be adjusted to come in ms's sooner. Right now it sounds like a bad dj is mixing the acapella over a beat and he has no good timing. I don't know what host you are using but if it has delay compensation, you could easily adjust it. Only other thing which is the quality of the mp3, but, I'm sure that is because of myspace, not your track. Other than that, not to bad.

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