link updated, any feedback would be great

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cool track, sounds great
a very "sublime" pads and melows
meaby you should add some perc to the bridge ,

very trancy stuff, but its pretty well done , nice job
i think its ready to send it to some label

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Originally posted by Gabriel Cazali cool track, sounds great a very "sublime" pads and melows meaby you should add some perc to the bridge , very trancy stuff, but its pretty well done , nice job i think its ready to send it to some label

thanks just need to get he balance right then ill be sending it off

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Love it, I just think the second pads that come in during the highly delayed pluck are a little too loud.

But yeah, sounds very good.

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Originally posted by parafrNalia Love it, I just think the second pads that come in during the highly delayed pluck are a little too loud. But yeah, sounds very good.

yeh i few ppl have said the same thing, duely noted , cheers

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Percs are a bit thin to me...

link updated again, think its got more impact now

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anymore feedback on this ?

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Hey m8,

Just saw this one, will listen to it when I get home!

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Originally posted by Theran Hey m8, Just saw this one, will listen to it when I get home!

cheers buddy

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Hi Andy, as promised I'll give you some feedback on the track.

I like the overall structure of the track, I think the percussion indeed need some beefing up because mostly I only hear the kick and snare (of which the last one is a bit to loud). I like the chords of the pads that you are using, but on the melody it sounds a bit simple and to be honest a bit dull.

I also think that with improving your bassline, you could have a great track here.

Nice job!

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