whoops...hmmm...if the hyperlinks don't work, than just copy the link and paste it in your URL.

By the way comments, suggestions, or feedback would be great.

I'm all ears.

Nice work on these. The mixing isn't the best in the world; it gets kind of muddy and it seems like you used too much compression because the kick drums sound kind of "muted." But the melodies have real emotion in them, which is what I find most important. "Headroom" especially put a smile on my face with those piano melodies.

The arrangements on these are also pretty unconventional but they definitely work in terms of carrying along the tracks.

You obviously have talent. Keep it up.

Last edited by MrJiveBoJingles on Nov-22-2008 at 18:34

Here are the correct links:

http://phijayy.com/music/playtekhno%20(jayy).mp3
http://phijayy.com/music/feelings%2...om%20(jayy).mp3
http://phijayy.com/music/headroom%20(jayy).mp3

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Originally posted by MrJiveBoJingles Nice work on these. The mixing isn't the best in the world; it gets kind of muddy and it seems like you used too much compression because the kick drums sound kind of "muted." But the melodies have real emotion in them, which is what I find most important. "Headroom" especially put a smile on my face with those piano melodies. The arrangements on these are also pretty unconventional but they definitely work in terms of carrying along the tracks. You obviously have talent. Keep it up.

Awesome...thanx for the comment, and thank's for fixing the links.

You're right.
I generally try to produce memorable melodies to the best of my abilities, which is kinda hard to do in an electronic track. Well hard for me anyways. The mixing/mastering as you can tell I'm still working on. All of the tracks except for "playtekhno" we're mastered by a mastering company, but if the mix isn't the best I guess there's little that they can do.
I'm trying to get better and better as I go.

You know how that can be. Thanks for the feedback.

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Originally posted by phijayy Awesome...thanx for the comment, and thank's for fixing the links.

No problem.

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I generally try to produce memorable melodies to the best of my abilities

It definitely shows.