Listened to halucinogen....

Your drums and sound are pretty standard and it isnt really catching your attention enough in the start imho.
I don't know if its just me or does those 303 sound out of tune?.

Although if you decide to listen through to the end youll find the maintheme quite good and catchy, synths are quite nice too.

Id suggest spending WAY more time on the whole tune instead of just your main climax.

Also try and use alot more Low End in mastering, would be great to hear the bass and kick with more punch cause it looses alot during the climax's and an outro would also been nice

All in all though, impressive melodies and a good synth making it even better but rest needs work.

A good melody and synth doesnt make a trance tune good........

Cheers,
MaC

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