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This is something I just put together, and I'm really trying to get some labels interested in my work. Any feedback you guys have would be much appreciated!

before anyone else ,

there is the music producers promotion but i would string together something longer so people could critique it a little better

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Pretty good stuff, I didn't really hear any bassline though.

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Originally posted by adi_hanson before anyone else , there is the music producers promotion but i would string together something longer so people could critique it a little better

yeah it was to short to really tell

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on the same note as the other replies, what youve got is alright but it needs working into a track with melodies, FX, automations etcetera

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Good start, but your bassline is off key relative to the arp. Try putting it at F.