k this is well light and fluff and has a few eq probz, but @ the same time has a lot of work put into it maybe try to hold back and space out your altimet sound, it all comes in to soon, also tey to be less intens, try compresion. xx

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everything sounds too loud, too much happening at once, try arranging the samples to the left or to the right of center a bit or lower the volumes of certain samples

and cut your fuckin hair