Hey, im posting this newest creation of mine.

This baby is in need of a name, so please help me think of any.

Artist: Subtara
Track: Untitled
Style: Breakbeat
Length: 5:40
Bitrate: 320

Link:

http://www.subtleinc.net/subtara_-_untitled_track.mp3

Any comments welcome, and especially a name.

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The melody towards the middle of the track reminds me of the 80s for some reason along with the funky snare. (This is a good thing, im a sucker for 80s) Name hmm... wow I suck with names, I always spend tons of hours on the name of the tracks I really wish to do something with because names is important to me, nothing pops up in my mind when I hear this

Thanks for the comments, I made it as an intro track, thats why its a little empty.. but i guess i can fill it up a little, as i didnt spend too much time on this already. Cheers

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Originally posted by palm oh title: break 01

Thanks, but id rather stick with GOT NO NAME5 instead.

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A bit of spicing up like, chopped up vocals some fxs would really do this track some good also I think the sub bass needs to be a bit louder. I can imagine this being mashed up with another track.

I'm usually decent at naming stuff, I'm getting a real kind of 'winter-esqe' vibe from this track, for some unknown reason. If that helps any.

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Originally posted by BshidoHEAT A bit of spicing up like, chopped up vocals some fxs would really do this track some good also I think the sub bass needs to be a bit louder. I can imagine this being mashed up with another track. I'm usually decent at naming stuff, I'm getting a real kind of 'winter-esqe' vibe from this track, for some unknown reason. If that helps any.

Hey, thanks.. gonna come up with some spicing, as i realise it might be a little empty yeah.

Winter ? Thats actually very good suggestion, i might use that.

Cheers.

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your host is fast

kick and snare are well chosen, they punch in the face.
personally the track feels a little empty before the melody comes in, I'd use some more variation in the rythm section, or maybe some FX.
The melody is nice, sounds remotely familiar.. not saying its a ripoff or anything, just reminiscent of something.
I also agree that it needs a bit more warmth in the subrange.
It's definitely a melancholic piece and according to the time in the year "Winter" might be a good title indeed. I'd also throw into the suggestion pot "memories of starlight" .. dunno, maybe a bit cheesy... guess "winter" is better

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Funky beat right from the start Sounds lovely electro'ish
Hmm the usage of those beats AND the 80's synths make it sound a little outdated though. Like it was produced a few years back.

The rythm still is nice and funky which makes up for it
Ah bass progression!
..although it's not much it adds so much dimension!


..oops I got caught up so much in listening I forgot to comment the rest of it but I guess that says enough!

The track really started to work for me from the moment you introduced the piano, before it didn't do that much except being FUNKAHH

I'd saaay;
- Retro Sinistro
- Quattro Retro
(or something with maestro)

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Title "Broken"? I dunno it's the first thing that came to mind

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