Too low gain on most instruments...but overall an all right tune.

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me likes just needs some fine tuning here and there and its all good

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yes u neeed to adjust the levels on most things, kick drum is way too loud, vocal too distant, other instrument too low...that can all be sorted easily, melodys ok

Last edited by 00264167 on Dec-15-2008 at 01:34

I found the wide range of the bassline a bit distracting. You have a start to something decent here, though.