Im listening to this on my laptop, so my opinion is based on poor sound quality speakers, anyway...

Upon first playing this, I really liked it straight away, just had a nice vibe to it and also sounded quite "pro", but boy o boy does it drag on, its just like 2 bars being repeated throughout the whole song, which was a real dissapointment as it started off really promising!! (That is a compliment by the way! lol)

Anyway, a little bit of variation in the patters, a little break somewhere and a bit of arranging, and you have got a winner on your hands.