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I would add better vocals or remove them.
There's very sparse percussion and not much effects on the instruments.
I would add more percussion and effects.
The lead synth is not bad, but not really exciting either, rather standard and predictable.
I didn't like the weird melodies in the beginning, middle and end at first, but now i think they add to the tracks.
I disagree with Sh!fty on the transitions, it can be refreshing to get unexpected transitions, but guide people a bit on some occasions.
Anyway, it sounds promising, but a lot of work needs to be done.
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