It's nowhere near professional level IMO. But i would like some feedback anyway please.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hLWLIHQz9Rc I should add that this is my first track in ableton...
sounds cheezy and generic, sorry
___________________ Can an idiot produce music? Judge for yourself.... http://www.myspace.com/incrediblyfunky
quote:Originally posted by Sh!fty sounds cheezy and generic, sorry Fine i can accept that but what makes it sound cheesy and generic? I am looking for some constructive criticism and some advice...
The hi-hats should evolve before the break. It sounds like there are some timing irregularities that could be tightened up quite a bit during the break. The thunder sound seems out of whack. The mix is very muddy. I like the lead sound, but I think you could do a lot more with it and it ought to be introduced, before the break. Good ideas but this needs a lot of refining.
Don't mess with Pink Floyd.
___________________ Latest releases: Endless Cycles [Capital Heaven] The Charlatan [Morphosis]
quote:Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Don't mess with Pink Floyd. Agree
Powered by: Trance Music & vBulletin Forums Copyright ©2000-2026, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd. Privacy Statement / DMCA