DUDE..

Loving the track after 3 minutes... such a classy awesome melody and drive, this is exactly how proper trance should sound!!

from 3:00 to 4:00 it sounds immense, the rest can be much much improved though.

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Hey man Thanks for the listen and the kind words!
Are there any preferences or ideas on how or what I should improve or change in the rest of the track?

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Hmm.. im not sure.. but i think u should build the a track around that riff at 3-4 minutes, its awesome!

But how i dont know.. atleast u should make it longer, and add some suspense and just use a small part of the riff in the build up.
Maybe add some vocal samples or something.. just some thoughts.
I dont think any of the synths in the buildup is anything to keep.

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typing as i listen, nice beat you got there..
im liking the sound of that synth sounds very appealing!!
the bassline however sounds good aswell, perhaps could use some more spicing to make it a more fatty bass?.. to me this track has a big appeal.. however i think you should work a bit more on the melody with maybe a light vocal pad in the background? you have improved a lot since i heard you last time. keep up the good work mate!

Rinster.

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Hey man thats pretty good! I could see this workign great mid set! All I would say is maybe make in a little longer and I agree, some type of vocal pad... but the melody kicks ass!!! I'd really like t play this once you get the next version done!

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Hey guys! First of all thanks for listening !

I'll look into the bass, I wasn't reaally satisfied with it the way it was, but I didn't know what. Maybe its just that it needs a little more 'phat' .
I'm glad everybody liked to track so far, I'll surely get a new version up pretty soon

Cheers!

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