I seem not to have gotten the whole track the first time around, as it stopped after just 3:16. I like what I've heard so far but I'll give you more feedback when the full version finishes downloading...

This is an interesting take on the original. Has a very different mood, kind of "mysterious"-sounding. It sort of sounds like you wrote it in Mixolydian mode because of the kind of dark and "wondering" yet peaceful feel. Cool.

The instrument you use to play the main melody sounds like it's set too far back in the mix. Also the acid-ish sound you have in here starts sounding a bit gritty to me in the highest frequencies. Not sure what you can do about that. Overall a neat track, though.

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Originally posted by MrJiveBoJingles This is an interesting take on the original. Has a very different mood, kind of "mysterious"-sounding. It sort of sounds like you wrote it in Mixolydian mode because of the kind of dark and "wondering" yet peaceful feel. Cool. The instrument you use to play the main melody sounds like it's set too far back in the mix. Also the acid-ish sound you have in here starts sounding a bit gritty to me in the highest frequencies. Not sure what you can do about that. Overall a neat track, though.

Cheers for the feedback.

Im glad you picked out that i wanted it to be deep, mystical , and a tad more emotional than the original, and you could say its Mixolydian because no black keys where touched in this.As for the main lead , ive automated the reverb , beacause i sorta wanted it to come from the back of the stereo field inwards but i can tweak that a bit.

thanks for the feedback.

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