My latest work so far:-with issues?

points that i know:-

Vocals a little out of time in places but thats my last things because its so awkward.

a little thin on FX in places.

but just wondering if ya'll could have a listen and see if you could point anything out or suggest anything?

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cheers!

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Last edited by adi_hanson on Mar-03-2009 at 19:42

any takers?

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Listening.

I like the synths, and the track has a nice pace to it.

The bass is not sitting right i think, i think an standard offbeat bass would work better here.

Overall, ok track.. the synths are pure and full sounding.. the vocals are.. well they work.. my main complaint would be the bass.

Fun track

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I'd check it out but if I download it, it'll cost me my job


Will give her a listen when I get home.

cheers for your comments and i await the commets too!

But yes subtle , it is a fun track and is in no way to be taken seriously , hell just listen to the original , i just want it to be a good dancey track!

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