hello everybody

ok this is almost done, just have some details, but the track sounds good for be a release or need more??
thank you people!!

http://www13.zippyshare.com/v/97796142/file.html

Last edited by esha on Mar-15-2009 at 17:26

You should uploaded to a file host site. as well as you tube and what have you.

From what i can hear here's what i think.

I think some of the sounds have to be more dynamic and have more character. Such as the synth riffs. just try some different effects with them.

Use some more percussion to give it some more rhythm and again my dynamics. Use some more hats for example.

There seems to be a lot of drawn out loops. If you are going to commit to the loops you have and apply less change, cut the time of the track and use the same loops for a shorter time of measures. I used to have loops that would go on for a long time and to me i noticed that the tracks became boring to listen to.

Anyways these are just a few suggestions/opinions. I am far from expert and I am into a different style than yours so some of my thoughts may not be as important. Hope this was somewhat useful.

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It does sound promising but I can't make a valid critique of YouTube quality sound.

thanks for your comments archaudio and EddieZilker both are right, the track needs some roll's between times, a eq and mastering but is a demo about hows the track, if really has future or not, thanks =)

another comment people??

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Originally posted by esha thanks for your comments archaudio and EddieZilker both are right, the track needs some roll's between times, a eq and mastering but is a demo about hows the track, if really has future or not, thanks =) another comment people?? this is a new link [[ LINK REMOVED ]]

Okay =)

Here is a comment commensurate with the 128kbps audio and your request.

Absolutely, this track has potential.

It could use some work on certain parts.

I thought the lead could use some development and you took a little while to get to the spoken word portion of the song. After the spoken word, the song just kind of died.


That said, given the cheapo version, the mix is done very well.

EDIT: If you want it done, badly, you'll get it done, badly. The worse you want it, the worse it gets.

Last edited by EddieZilker on Mar-12-2009 at 02:25