alright well. this is my 2nd track here, it is not officially released yet. because I am trying to get as much feedback as possible before the final cut.

any responses are welcome, anything you don't like (LITTLE OR BIG!) please let me know.



PLEASE NOTE: This track is somewhat progressive.

you can download the unreleased version here - [[ LINK REMOVED ]]

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Just my opinion, but I thought this arrangement could have been different. You missed out on an opportunity to do a great epic build-up. When you introduce your main synth element, the underlying arp/bassline is still going. You could cut the everything but that element, then bring in a pad...continue to build up elements to about 3:52 where you have all the elements kick in.

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Sunset Mushroom live at the WMC Thrusday, March 26

right, i will work on that buildup and try what you suggested.

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